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The Management Says:
Break My Heart Comics, 28 May 2008 05:31 pm

Suckish
Okay. I like the shading on it but not the coloring. Does that make since? >=

Also don't like the girl in panel three.

But I love Mel so it doesn't matter. <-=




User Comments:
Shoebox, 28 May 2008 09:18 pm


The art seems a little hard to grasp, but at the same time it really draws me in. I also like how you are introducing the story, I'm already interested!
-Shoebox writer-


Break My Heart Comics, 29 May 2008 05:20 am

...I see what you mean
Everything looks like a blob yet you wanna figure out what the blob is...Cool.

I'm working out the kinks on using indian ink and colored pencils....But thanks for the comment. I really appreactie it.


shadowrider7, 01 Jun 2008 03:22 pm


Haha! She looks cute when she's crying!


Break My Heart Comics, 01 Jun 2008 05:16 pm


Thanks!
I tried to make her as cute as possible.


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